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    2013广东基础写作专项训练 10

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    2013广东基础写作专项训练10

    光明新区高级中学 宾爱华

    1.neighbor与……为邻

    2.be made up of/consist of由……组成

    3.be located /situated in/on/next to 坐落于

    4. serve as当……用

    5.with a history of / It has a history of ...有……的历史

    6. with a population of It has a population of ... 有……人口

    7.It covers an area of 它的面积有...

    8. the third largest city第三大城市

    9. be famous for以……而著名

    10. be well-known for/as因为/作为……而出名

    11. on its east lies 东边有…… 12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方

    13. be rich /abundant in盛产

    14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房

    15.film industry 电影业

    16.an ideal place 一个理想的地方

    在当地人开办的餐馆里

    各种名牌

    1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。

    2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。

    3. Guangzhou, a city with a population of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了。

    4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million. 这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。

    5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿, 而且气候温和。

    6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。

    7.The hotel can hold 5000 people. 这家宾馆可容纳500人。

    8. It is five metres long/wide//high/deep. 他是有5米长/宽/高/深。

    9.Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. 香港是一个激动人心的地方,在那里人民可以通过参观众多著名旅游景点, 如迪士尼乐园, 海洋公园,

    南丫岛等, 来休闲度假。

    1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作, 通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性, 另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容, 不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译, 如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of

    China”这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China.

    2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。

    3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景,避免用it作主语引导第一句, 而应该具体写出描述的对象,如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。

    你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城,请根据以下的信息要点,用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点,介绍的开头已经给出,不计入5个句子中。

    【信息要点】

    [写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

    [评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

    [例题导写]

    1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作。

    2. 草拟提纲、先解决难点: (1)防御外来入侵者 defend people against the invaders

    (2)著名旅游景点之一 one of the famous places of interest

    3.变换表达, 丰富句式。

    (“是世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从句)

    times. (“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句)

    (3) there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句)

    (“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构)

    (5) The Great Wall is a famous historical attraction attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year. (使用“如此……以致”的句型表达)

    [参考范文]

    is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.

    你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组,在汇报课上,各小组成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市,以下是你搜集到的关于香港的信息。

    参考词汇:澳门 Macao南丫岛 Lemma Island

    [写作内容]

    请根据以上表格内容, 介绍香港的有关情况。

    [写作要求]

    只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

    [评分标准]

    句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

    参考范文

    Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as well. In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong an ideal place for shopping. Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. In the restaurants run by the local people, visitors can enjoy the delicious food at a reasonable price. What’s more, Hong Kong people are creative and passionate, creating their promising future with wisdom and diligence.